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Sure! Here's your story rewritten in three distinct styles:
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1. Serious Tone (Light Drama / Narrative Style)
Leo and John’s Payback
Leo and John had grown up in a household where laughter was the background noise of daily life. Their father, a 50-year-old man with snow-white hair, a jolly beard, and an even jollier belly, was the heart of every family joke. His pranks were legendary — harmless, but relentless.
But one day, the brothers decided enough was enough. “He’s always got the upper hand,” Leo muttered. “Let’s turn the tables.”
John nodded thoughtfully. The plan was simple — and classic. They’d slip a mild laxative into their dad’s favorite chocolate milkshake. Nothing harmful, just enough to send a message: We can prank too.
That afternoon, their dad took the bait. He downed the shake, chuckling at a joke he had just told — unaware of the revenge brewing in his belly. About fifteen minutes later, the color drained from his face. “Uh oh,” he mumbled, rushing to the bathroom in a panic.
The boys watched from a distance, barely able to contain their laughter. It was rare to see their dad caught off guard.
Minutes passed. Then a shout echoed from the bathroom: “You two are in so much trouble!”
But when he finally emerged, red-faced but smiling, all he said was: “Okay. You got me. But next time... don’t forget I taught you everything you know.”
The prank war had officially begun.
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2. Cartoon Style (Wacky and Fun)
"The Great Dad Prank!"
Starring:
🎩 Dad the Prank King
👦 Leo the Schemer
👦 John the Giggle Machine
Scene 1: The Setup
Narrator: In a quiet little house full of laughter and bad jokes...
Leo: “He’s pranked us for the last time!”
John: “Time to strike back... with science!” 🧪
Scene 2: The Shake of Doom
They blend up the world’s most perfect chocolate milkshake... and toss in a sneaky little laxative. 😈
Dad: Slurp slurp “Mmm! You boys are the best!”
Scene 3: The Explosion
Minutes later...
Dad: “Uhh... something’s bubbling in the belly!”
Zoom! Off he runs to the bathroom, making sounds that would terrify a bear. 🏃♂️💨
Scene 4: The Peek & The Panic
Leo: “The door’s open!”
John: “He forgot to lock it! Operation ‘Bathroom Cam’ is a go!”
📹 They peek inside (just a little!), capturing his cartoonish scream and exaggerated panic face.
Dad (from inside): “You little monsters! This means WAR!”
Narrator: And thus... the Great Family Prank War was born! Stay tuned for the next episode...
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3. Comic Script Format
Title: “PRANKED!” – Issue #1
Page 1
Panel 1: Wide shot of the family living room. Dad is laughing at a video, while Leo and John whisper in the background.
LEO: “It’s time we show him who’s boss.”
JOHN: “Operation Chocolate Storm begins now.”
Page 2
Panel 1: Close-up of them blending a milkshake, with an evil glint in Leo’s eye.
LEO: “One scoop of justice... and one teaspoon of payback.”
Panel 2: Dad takes the milkshake from them with a big grin.
DAD: “Wow, you boys are being nice today!”
LEO & JOHN (together, whispering): “He has no idea.”
Page 3
Panel 1: Dad lounging in his chair.
SFX: GURRRRRGGGLLLLLEEEE
DAD (thought bubble): “Oh no.”
Panel 2: Dad runs toward the bathroom with motion lines behind him.
DAD: “MOVE! MOVE! THIS IS A CODE BROWN!”
Page 4
Panel 1: Leo holding a phone camera, creeping toward the bathroom.
JOHN (whispering): “He forgot to lock the door!”
LEO: “Jackpot.”
Panel 2: Slight peek into the bathroom — we just see Dad’s shocked face from behind the shower curtain.
DAD: “YOU PRANKED ME?!”
LEO & JOHN (off-panel): “PAYBACK!!”
Page 5:
Panel 1: Dad exits the bathroom, shaking his fist but smiling.
DAD: “Alright. It’s on. You’re gonna regret this.”
Panel 2: Leo and John high-fiving.
CAPTION: “To be continued... in PRANKED! #2: The Return of Revenge!”
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Let me know if you want these adapted into a storyboard, comic panels, or even audio script format!
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