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 . NASA MEDICAL EXAM ROOM – DAY

The room is sterile, cold, and eerily reminiscent of 1960s NASA. FRANK, TANK, JERRY, and HAWK—all in their mid-50s—walk in, slightly uncomfortable. A chubby, balding DOCTOR (late 50s) is already waiting for them, clipboard in hand.

DOCTOR FELL
All right, gentlemen. You know the drill. Take off all your clothes.

The men glance at each other, groaning.

TANK
You’d think after 30 years, they’d change the routine...

FRANK
We were praying they did.

HAWK
Same circus, older clowns.

They reluctantly start undressing. As clothes come off, they glance at each other’s bodies.

JERRY
(looking at Tank's stomach)
Nice six-pack, Tank. What’s that—Budweiser?

TANK
(laughing)
Still got more muscle than all of you put together.

FRANK
Yeah, it’s just hiding behind the insulation.

They chuckle as they line up, naked, shoulder to shoulder. DOCTOR FELL puts on latex gloves with a loud snap.

DOCTOR FELL
All right. Side by side. Let’s get this over with.

He steps up to TANK.

DOCTOR FELL (CONT'D)
Cough.

TANK coughs.

DOCTOR FELL
Again.

TANK coughs louder. Suddenly, the door swings open and in walks a striking, 40-something redheaded woman in a white coat—DOCTOR GREEN. She’s calm and professional.

DOCTOR GREEN
Good morning, gentlemen. I’m Doctor Green. I’ll be assisting Doctor Fell today.

Three of the men—TANK, FRANK, and HAWK—scramble to cover their genitals, horrified. JERRY, unbothered, keeps standing tall with a grin on his face.

JERRY
(smiling)
Hi there.

Doctor Green walks over, glances down at Jerry casually, then up to meet his eyes with a smirk.

DOCTOR GREEN
(pleasantly)
Nice to meet you, Jerry.

She turns and walks out. Awkward silence.

TANK
(grinning)
Nothing to be ashamed of, boys.

FRANK
(grumbling)
Easy for you to say...

They all start chuckling again, laughter breaking the tension as DOCTOR FELL continues the exam.

FADE OUT.

Let me know if you want this scene expanded, adapted for a short film, or stylized in a different tone (like sitcom or drama).


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